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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 10:25 am

Okay, so I wrote this poem, and I've posted it on charminggentlemen..so I decided to post it here too Smile
And I love feedback, so if you'd comment, it'd be appreciated Smile

I thought...
...You'd be the guide to show me the way
...You'd be my sunshine on those rainy days
...You'd be there, to say "It's OK"
...That forever, with you I'd stay
...I knew that people do change
...Just maybe the love would remain
...I'd never have this to say

But I was wrong...
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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 10:27 am

aww Sarah!
That's so beautiful!
ur a great poet!=)

wow.
that was good=)
t4p [thanks for posting]
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 10:30 am

Aww thanks Smile

Psshhhh I'll probably be posing a lot..no need to thank me Razz
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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 10:33 am

YAY!
-dances-

do u have any other poems?=)
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 10:37 am

I have a couple..I don't write poems very often..I usually just write like..about life..but I guess here's one..haha..It's not that good, but oh well..

As the moon shines through the darkness of night
I sit here thinking of you
as the sun shines casting its beautiful light
I still think about you

I wonder how life would be
had we never parted,
had you never left me
living broken hearted

You've probably found someone new,
She's perfect in every way
but me, I'm still thinking of you
and the events of that miserable day

The time will surely come
when I finally move on,
and I want you to know
...never again will I be the pawn...
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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 10:43 am

aww
u have a knack for writing poetry
=)
i bet them JoBros would be very impressed.

u kno how some people give gifts to the JoBros at M&G's and stuff
wel u can give them a poem.

i was gonna do that once but i chickened out in giving it to them
i regret it=(
lol
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 10:47 am

Aww thanks again Mandy

But I would write them a different poem, because I don't think they'd really wanna hear about a teenage heartbreak..or maybe I could be wrong..

I'd probably chicken out too

Hopefully I'll meet them one day....

And Mandy, Can I hear the poem you were gonna give to them? Razz
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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 11:07 am

ha i knew u were gonna ask me.
but it was corny.
nothing near as great as urs.
i lost it=/
it was about when i became a fan, why i became a fan and a lil something about each of them.
=)
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 11:12 am

Aww hahah thanks, but I'm sure it was amazing Smile

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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 11:14 am

my mom laughed when i read it to her.
i dont think she meant it was amazing.lol
but its weird, even though she laughed she kept telling me to give it to them.=P
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 11:19 am

Maybe she thought that they'd think it was cute Smile

My mom doesn't even know who they are, and if I tell her, she probably won't care, hahah
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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 11:34 am

haha i told her i have OJD
and she was like
Thats nice.

i was like.
ur not even gonna ask what that is?? what if i was really sick?!?!

and shes like.
"ok , then what is it?"

and i was like
" Obsessive Jonas Disorder"

and she just smiled.lol
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 11:41 am

Aww hahahah!
"You're not even gonna ask what it is!?"affraid
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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 11:48 am

yeah .
i was just like
sheesh mom
way to ruin my OJD moment.
-sigh-
lol.
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 11:50 am

I'd be like "MOM I'm DYING here of OJD!!! I need.. my medication!! *cough* or you know, the Jonas Brothers!" Smile
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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 11:55 am

haha
Jonas Brothers are my anti-drug.
lol.
i saw that somewhere.
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 11:58 am

OYY me too..it was an avatar or something Smile
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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 12:06 pm

yes. yes it was.
haha.

=)
i love them JoBros.
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 12:08 pm

MEE TOOO

Wait..does you brothaaa like 'em?

Hahahha..mine have never ehard of them, although once when Poor Unfortunate Souls was on TV my brother Luc was like "Ehh At least they play their own instruments...They're alright"

and I was all "They're great!!"

It was back before I was a heeuuggeee fan Smile
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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 4:43 pm

haha yeah my bro thinks theyre pretty kool.

He actually met them once

with me=)
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:14 pm

NO WAY!
I'm soo jealous Razz
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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:33 pm

lol.
The JoBros were so nice to him.
They shook his hand
and they were like
" Hey, how'd you like the show?"

it was cute=-)
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:36 pm

I probably would've been like "YOU'RE SMEEXXXIIII "

haahahha..no I probably would've just said that I loved them, and then fainted ... afro

And what did they say to you Missy Mandy??Wink
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Post  Admin on Sat Nov 10, 2007 7:21 pm

they said....
OMJ i dont even remember cuz i was just like..

woah.

lol

I got to Kevin and I was all comfortable with a smile
i was like Heyyyyy Kevin!
and he was like Heyy how are u
-hug-

I got to Nick i was like
hi-says quickly-
he was just like hi-says quickly-

and then i got to Joe and was just like
-in a low voice-
Hello Joe
then he chuckled and was like Thanks for coming

and yup Nick was definitely the quietest out of the three=)
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Post  --Sarahxo' on Sun Nov 11, 2007 7:19 am

Aww ...maybe he was...MANDYSTRUCK!

He was soo distracted by your beauty and your amazing voice he just couldn't talk!!
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